Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
correct1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have practice.
correct2: To ensure success, they should require the ones doing the experiments should have new lab equipment in the project.
correct2:
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
correct 1: Darnel has no reason to question them instructions but he does want an explanation for this exam.
correct 2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
correct 1: Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that.
correct 2: The affect of the program cancellation, which bothered us the most, was to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
correct 1: You should of heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
correct 2: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
correct 1: Rob commented that our neighbors have to welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.
correct 2: Because neither Ben nor I had not read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word 'chide.'
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
correct 1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
correct 2: The race between the three relay teams is close; none of the three is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
correct 1: Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-election lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
correct 2: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
correct 1: Our social studies teacher asked us, to write reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
correct 2: Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
correct 1: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
correct 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
correct 1: Reading the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
correct 2: Because there were too many things to do I coudn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
correct 1: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II that maintained peace in that country.
correct 2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Davida requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
correct 1: "I reviewed the book really well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
correct 2: "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
correct 1: He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high-school reunion because he lives too far away.
correct 2: Regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet, will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
correct 1: you should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
correct 2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
correct 1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he out of student government?
correct 2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
correct 1: Walking quietly alone the road, Alexander was impossible to see speeding car.
correct 2: "After the race began, take these medals to the track club, located east of the school."
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
correct 1: "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
correct 2: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
correct 1: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
correct 2: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show "Classic Car Reports."
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
correct 1: Because it snowed heavy last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
correct 2: They mentioned that on January 2nd 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
correct 1: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
correct 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.
DOL 23
Quiz!
DOL 24
Review quiz
none
DOL 25
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
correct 1: The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
correct 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, we should finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library
Directions: First, copy and paste the sentences below onto your DOL page. Second, work with your DOL partner to correct the sentences.
DOL 1: NA
DOL 2: NA
DOL 3
Sentence 1: mr. palonia says that there are some athletes who are on this here team that believe noone should not have any practice
Sentence 2: to ensure success they should require those in the project the ones doing the experiment too have new lab equipment
correct1: Mr. Palonia says that there are some athletes on this team who believe no one should have practice.
correct2: To ensure success, they should require the ones doing the experiments should have new lab equipment in the project.
correct2:
DOL 4
Sentence 1: darnel dont have no reason too question them instructions but he does want a explanation for this here exam
Sentence 2: me and olga went downtown we went to buy new notebooks we need them for class we also need them for our long term project
correct 1: Darnel has no reason to question them instructions but he does want an explanation for this exam.
correct 2: Olga and I went downtown to buy new notebooks for class and our long term project.
DOL 5
Sentence 1: yes terri won the game but at the time we dont know that she had
Sentence 2: the affect of the program cancellation which bothered most of we members was to end the project before we can finish
correct 1: Terri won the game, but at that time, we didn't know that.
correct 2: The affect of the program cancellation, which bothered us the most, was to end the project before we could finish.
DOL 6
Sentence 1: because you should of heard their voice when i told them how there vacaion time would be effected
Sentence 2: irregardless of what grandpa says itll be alright to bring a friend to the family celebration
correct 1: You should of heard their voice when I told them how their vacation time would be affected.
correct 2: Regardless of what Grandpa says, it'll be all right to bring a friend to the family celebration.
DOL 7
Sentence 1: rob commentd that us neighbors has got to be welcoming to children outside of our neighborhood he mentioned to us
Sentence 2: neither ben or me because we hae not read the assignment knew the definition of the word chide
correct 1: Rob commented that our neighbors have to welcome children from outside of our neighborhood.
correct 2: Because neither Ben nor I had not read the assignment, we didn't know the definition of the word 'chide.'
DOL 8
Sentence 1: marcus a serious athlete tries very hard im sure he will see alot of action in todays game
Sentence 2: the reace between the three relay teams is close none of the 3 however are giving up hope of winning
correct 1: Marcus, a serious athlete, tries very hard; I'm sure I will see a lot of actions in today's game.
correct 2: The race between the three relay teams is close; none of the three is giving up hope of winning.
DOL 9
Sentence 1: ms perez the science teacher stated within a short time free-electron lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity did because it changed the world
Sentence 2: yesterday mom told us that whomever borrows her new sweater have to take it to the cleaners
correct 1: Ms. Perez, the science teacher, stated, "Within a short time, free-election lasers will change the world as much as the invention of electricity."
correct 2: Yesterday, Mom told us that whoever borrowed her new sweater has to take it to the cleaners.
DOL 10
Sentence 1: our Social Studies teacher asked us who have her as a teacher to write reports ont he south she said it was to be an emphasis on african americans
Sentence 2: well i think someones mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us girls to the concert
correct 1: Our social studies teacher asked us, to write reports on the South with emphasis on African Americans.
correct 2: Well, I think someone's mother should volunteer to bring the rest of us to the concert.
DOL 11
Sentence 1: my oldest sister whose going to live in the new east town apartments wants youre help moving in tonite
Sentence 2: at the end of her speech amanda said if you need farther informations dont hesitate to ask me for more information
correct 1: My oldest sister, who's going to live in the New East Town Apartments, wants your help moving in tonight.
correct 2: At the end of her speech, Amanda said, "If you need further information, don't hesitate to ask me."
DOL 12
Sentence 1:having read the novel the man in the iron mask i wanna find out more about the french revolution
Sentence 2: there were to many things to do i couldnt finish my homework practicing my soccer skills or go to my friends concert
correct 1: Reading the novel The Man in the Iron Mask, I want to find out more about the French Revolution.
correct 2: Because there were too many things to do I coudn't finish my homework, practice my soccer skills, or go to friend's concert.
DOL 13
Sentence 1: mr. Guarino told us that the 24th corps which was assigned to germany after world war 2 helped maintain peace in that there country
Sentence 2: having finished her foreign exchange trip a plane ticket was requested to the united states at the end of her foreign exchange trip
correct 1: Mr. Guarino told us that the Twenty-fourth Corps, which was assigned to Germany after World War II that maintained peace in that country.
correct 2: Having finished her foreign exchange trip, Davida requested a plane ticket to the United States.
DOL 14
Sentence 1: i reviewed the book real good i received a good grade on the report said Sonia
Sentence 2: although we had 25 inches of show last Winter the bushes appear to be alright pedro noted
correct 1: "I reviewed the book really well and received a good grade on the report," said Sonia.
correct 2: "Although we had 25 inches of snow last winter, the bushes appeared to be all right," Pedro noted.
DOL 15
Sentence 1: he was incidentally unable to attend hour 15th high-school reunion he just couldn't make it because he lives too far away
Sentence 2: it says that irregardless of the effect of poor weather the shakespearean play romeo and juliet will be sold out
correct 1: He was, incidentally, unable to attend our fifteenth high-school reunion because he lives too far away.
correct 2: Regardless of poor weather, the Shakespearean play, Romeo and Juliet, will be sold out.
DOL 16
Sentence 1: you should of followed three steps first open the hood secondly checking the level and lastly add more oil
Sentence 2: although my dog is different than yours we wont have no problem walking them to together
correct 1: you should have followed three steps: first, open the hood; second, check the level; and last, add more oil.
correct 2: Although my dog is different from yours, we won't have problem walking them together.
DOL 17
Sentence 1: does caroline know weather raul might of come to the class council meeting at 600pm or was he off of student government
Sentence 2: there are 3 qualities that are existing that give this field hockey team the better advantage in the league a terrific goalie a great offense and a winning spirit
correct 1: Does Caroline know whether Raul might have come to the class council meeting at 6:00 p.m. or was he out of student government?
correct 2: There are three qualities that give this field hockey team the advantage in the league: a terrific goalie, a great offense, and a winning spirit.
DOL 18
Sentence 1: walking quiet along the road it was impossible to see that car that was speeding
Sentence 2: after the race begins delia take these here medals to the track club at the school located East of here
correct 1: Walking quietly alone the road, Alexander was impossible to see speeding car.
correct 2: "After the race began, take these medals to the track club, located east of the school."
DOL 19
Sentence 1: nothing could be farther from the truth mr perez stated than your comments
Sentence 2: she was quite young no more than 26 when she earned her doctorate consequently she began her career early
correct 1: "Nothing could be farther from the truth," Mr. Perez stated, "than your comments."
correct 2: She was quite young, no more than twenty-six, earned her doctorate; consequently, she began her career early.
DOL 20
Sentence 1: yes their going to welcome whomever want to come to the rally weather democrat or republican
Sentence 2: this car a 1966 mustang is now extremely valuable irregardless of what he tv show classic cars reports
correct 1: Yes, they're going to welcome whoever want to come to the rally, whether Democrat or Republican.
correct 2: This car, a 1966 Mustang, is now extremely valuable, regardless of what the TV show "Classic Car Reports."
DOL 21
Sentence 1: because it snowed heavy last night so its alright if noone comes to basketball practice because of all the snow
Sentence 2: they mentioned i believe that on january 2 2000 this here building was seventy five years old
correct 1: Because it snowed heavy last night, it's all right if no one comes to basketball practice.
correct 2: They mentioned that on January 2nd 2000, this building was seventy-five years old.
DOL 22
Sentence 1: follow some simple rules and youll succeed listen in class doing your homework and learn as much as possible
Sentence 2: in order to interest larry his role in the play has got to be made more challenging martina stated
correct 1: Follow some simple rules and you'll succeed: listen in class, do your homework, and learn as much as possible.
correct 2: "In order to interest Larry, his role in the play has to be more challenging," Martina stated.
DOL 23
Quiz!
DOL 24
Review quiz
none
DOL 25
Sentence 1: the titanic carried more then 1,500 people to there graves it was believed to by unsinkable
Sentence 2: the student teacher arrives next week it is necessary that we finishes reading eliots long poem the waste land
correct 1: The Titanic, believed to be unsinkable, carried more than 1,500 people to their graves.
correct 2: Because the student teacher arrives next week, we should finish reading Eliot's long poem, The Waste Land.
DOL 26
Sentence 1: a renowned magazine many well known writers submit articles and stories to the atlantic monthly
Sentence 2: i am very eager to read the french novel the plague carmen said but its not in our library